The Breakout Breakdown

GET EXPERT FEEDBACK ON YOUR SCRIPT  

 

 

You've already done the hard part. You’ve written the script. Now it's time to step back and see it through the eyes of someone who reads scripts professionally and understands what today's industry is looking for.

The Breakout Intensive

1:1 Coaching with Conrad Sun

 

 

 

It was incredible speaking with you about your stories and vision as a screenwriter. The Breakout Intensive is designed to take your ideas and give you a clear roadmap on how to write an undeniably viable script.

Let’s lock in your spot and write your Breakout Script together.

What Is Next:

Choose the pricing option that matches your script. Submit your script and within 1 week, you'll receive your Breakout Breakdown:    
a written report that evaluates your script and the Five Key Pillars every Breakout screenplay needs to succeed.

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CONCEPT
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CHARACTER
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WORLD
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STORY
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POINT OF VIEW
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CONCEPT
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CHARACTER
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WORLD
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STORY
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POINT OF VIEW
You'll also receive a General Response section where I'll share my overall reaction to the script: what immediately stood out, what excited me, and where I see strategic paths to success within the industry.

Once you've had a chance to review your Breakdown, we'll schedule a one-hour notes call. During our conversation, we'll walk through each of the Five Pillars together, identify your script's greatest strengths, pinpoint the areas that deserve the most attention, and create a clear, practical roadmap for your next draft.

Breakout Breakdown Pricing

Half-Hour TV Pilot

$100

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one-Hour TV Pilot

$150

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Feature Screenplay

$250

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I can't wait to read your story.