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A New Approach To Screenwriting That Executives Can't Ignore.
As a working literary manager, I've discovered why most scripts fail to gain traction in Hollywood—and it's not what you think. I believe the fate of your script is sealed before you even type FADE IN.
I've helped countless screenwriters transform their stories into remarkable scripts that get producers excited, open doors, and launch careers. The secret? It's not the words on the page — it's how you properly develop the five key conceits of your script before you write a single word.
As a working literary manager, I've discovered why most scripts fail to gain traction in Hollywood—and it's not what you think. I believe the fate of your script is sealed before you even type FADE IN.
I've helped countless screenwriters transform their stories into remarkable scripts that get producers excited, open doors, and launch careers. The secret? It's not the words on the page — it's how you properly develop the five key conceits of your script before you write a single word.
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What Makes Breakout Story Different?
We do things differently. Unlike traditional screenwriting workshops taught by former writers, script consultants or teachers, our program is led by an active Hollywood literary manager who’s working in the industry in real-time. With up-to-date insights into what is selling, what producers are looking for, and how the industry landscape is evolving, we bring you the knowledge you need to succeed in today’s competitive market.
You've probably heard the phrase "Writing is rewriting." But unlike other services that simply provide mentorship and script notes after you've written your script, our approach is uniquely designed for us to work with you before you write your script in a process we developed known as "Pre-Writing". We focus on collaborative discussions on how to develop the five essential pillars of a great screenplay: Concept, Character, World, Story, and Point of View. This ensures your script is built on a foundation designed to captivate and avoid the top five reasons executives pass on scripts.
Key Highlights
Led By An Active Literary Manager
Gain up-to-date insights directly from someone working in Hollywood today.
A New Innovative Approach To Writing
Based on hundreds of responses from industry executives and available through our five-course workshop.
Effective One-On-One & Group Coaching
Different coaching options offered to suit your writing needs.
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Free Tutorial - Write Your "Hotel California"
Learn how to Write a Remarkable Screenplay that Will Work for You Every Time
Discover a literary manager's approach to writing your Breakout Script aka your HOTEL CALIFORNIA. After submitting hundreds of scripts to industry executives, we've broken down the top five reasons why executives pass on scripts a developed a process known as Pre-Writing for writers to adopt in order to avoid those top five reasons. Whether you’re an up-and-coming or an already-established screenwriter this tutorial will give you insight on a new approach your craft and hopefully lead to your script gaining the attention it deserves.
What You’ll Learn
Practice Doesn’t Make Perfect -Practice Makes Permanent
Just because you continue to write and churn out scripts, doesn't mean you're going to improve as a writer. Like elite athletes, you have to know how to practice and spend time in the gym to give you better results.
Passes Are Not Always Subjective
Learn how properly developing the five key conceits of your story will make your script objectively compelling so that the only reason for passing is purely subjective.
Writing is Pre-Writing
Like a master chef spending hours preparing ingredients before the actual cooking begins, learn the importance of developing your concept, character, world, story and point of view before you open Final Draft.
THE PRE-WRITING WORKSHOP
Learn a new approach to screenwriting that will turn your remarkable stories into viable scripts that get attention.
Six in-depth video lessons designed to help you develop industry-ready scripts before you even start writing
Most screenwriters start writing their script without fully developing the key elements of their story - and it shows. if you do not properly develop these elements, your script's fate is already determined before you even begin to write and you will more than likely received undesired passes as result.This workshop is a 6-module video course designed to teach an effective and essential part of the screenwriting process we like to call PRE-WRITING. Based on the top five reasons scripts get passed on, we will teach you how to properly develop the five essential conceits that make your script objectively compelling - so if you do receive a pass, it's pure subjective.
Module 1: Introduction
- Why Writing Is Pre-Writing
- Identify Your Story's Anchor
- Identify Your Story's Anchor
Module 2: Concept
- The Power of a Concept Statement
- How Polarity Will Make Any Concept More Compelling
- How Polarity Will Make Any Concept More Compelling
Module 3: Character
- Make Your Audience Care About Your Character
- The Truth About Buildling Compelling Character Arcs
- The Truth About Buildling Compelling Character Arcs
Module 4: World
- The Distinction Between World and Setting
- Distill Your World Rules That Make Your Story Captivating
- Distill Your World Rules That Make Your Story Captivating
Module 5: Story
- The Importance of The Change In Status Quo
- Three Essential Beats That Make Up Your Incitigin Incident.
- Three Essential Beats That Make Up Your Incitigin Incident.
Module 6: Point of View
- 3 Reactions Your POV Should Invoke
- Why a Strong POV Can Result In a YES
- Why a Strong POV Can Result In a YES
Why This Workshop Stands Out
Elevate Your Screenwriting with Custom-Tailored Coaching
If you’re ready to take your screenwriting to the next level, we offer several coaching options depending on your budget and creative needs. Whether you’re revising an already-finished script or starting fresh with a new idea, this is your opportunity to receive expert-level guidance from an active literary manager based on the pre-writing method taught by our workshop.
Perfect For:
Emerging writers seeking strategic feedback and guidance.
Established professionals looking for a new approach toward elevating their craft.
Creators looking to connect with like-minded story-tellers.
DISCLAIMER : This platform was designed for coaching and educational purposes only. It was not designed for me to sign clients as a manager. Signing up for coaching services does not mean you are represented by me nor will it lead to representation. If your intention is to seek representation from me, please do not sign up for coaching.
See Why Writers Love the Pre-Writing Workshop
Breakouts revolutionized the way I approach screenwriting. The structured tools and resources helped me refine my story ideas and turn them into compelling scripts.
Brennan J.
Client
Thanks to Breakouts, I finally unlocked my creative potential. The user-friendly interface and expert guidance made the pre-writing process enjoyable and productive.
Melanie C.
Client
Breakouts has everything a screenwriter needs to succeed. From brainstorming tools to advanced outlining features, it’s a one-stop solution for creating scripts that resonate. Hollywood, here I come!
Shannon M.
Client
Breakouts has everything a screenwriter needs to succeed. From brainstorming tools to advanced outlining features, it’s a one-stop solution for creating scripts that resonate. Hollywood, here I come!
Shannon M.
Client
Breakouts revolutionized the way I approach screenwriting. The structured tools and resources helped me refine my story ideas and turn them into compelling scripts.
Brennan J.
Client
Thanks to Breakouts, I finally unlocked my creative potential. The user-friendly interface and expert guidance made the pre-writing process enjoyable and productive.
Melanie C.
Client
Meet Conrad Sun: From Filmmaker Dreams to Screenwriting Mentor
Turn Your Writing Passion Into a Professional Breakout Story
Like so many others, Conrad Sun aspired to become a filmmaker when he moved to LA in 2009. Accepted into the prestigious Peter Stark Producing Program at USC Film School, he immersed himself in the industry, learning the ins and outs of storytelling, development and production. But it was during this journey that Conrad discovered his true passion: collaborating with screenwriters.
After spending two years as a development executive at a production company, Conrad transitioned into literary management in 2014 – a role that allowed him to fully dedicate himself to empowering writers. As the co-founder of his own literary management company, Conrad has spent nearly a decade helping writers succeed whether selling a screenplay, landing a staffing gig, or
After spending two years as a development executive at a production company, Conrad transitioned into literary management in 2014 – a role that allowed him to fully dedicate himself to empowering writers. As the co-founder of his own literary management company, Conrad has spent nearly a decade helping writers succeed whether selling a screenplay, landing a staffing gig, or
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