JOIN THE BREAKOUT INTENSIVE

Get Your Script Industry-Ready

Work 1:1 with Conrad Sun ,a Hollywood literary manager on your script. (Limited spots)
Join The Breakout Intensive
Full script read by Conrad • Written “Breakout Blueprint” story breakdown • 60-minute live notes call
WHAT THE BREAKOUT INTENSIVE IS

A Private Script Diagnostic with a Working Hollywood Manager

The Breakout Intensive is not a course or a casual notes swap.It’s a one-on-one story lab where Conrad reads your script, breaks it down using his Breakout Story framework, and gives you a clear plan to bring it up to industry standard.
Understand what your script needs to gain traction.
Save months of blind rewrites. Know exactly what to fix next.
Leave with a concrete, industry-informed roadmap for your next draft.
More Than a Screenwriting Program
WHO IS IT FOR

Built for Writers Who Are Ready to Take Their Story Seriously

The Breakout Intensive is for you if:
You already have a feature, pilot, or sample or you’re actively developing one and want to build it right from the ground up.
You want feedback from someone who actually reads scripts for a living, not just peers or friends.
You want your next draft to feel industry-ready, not just “a little better than the last one.”
WHAT YOU GET

Here’s Exactly What You Get in The Breakout Intensive

Feature list:

 Full Script Read by Conrad

Your script is read start to finish by a working Hollywood literary manager.

Written “Breakout Blueprint”

A detailed breakdown of your story using Conrad’s five pillars: Concept, Character, World, Story, POV. You see what’s landing, what isn’t, and why.

60-Minute 1:1 Notes Call

A live call with Conrad to walk through your Blueprint, ask questions, and map a concrete plan for your next draft.

The Pre-Writing Workshop

Access Conrad’s core pre-writing lessons so you can build a new script from scratch or tighten the one you already have before he reads it.

Replay Recording (Optional, if you’ll offer it)

A recording of your call so you can revisit the notes instead of scrambling to write everything down.
The Breakout Intensive (Limited Offer)

Join The Breakout Intensive

Full script read by Conrad
Written Breakout Blueprint
60-minute 1:1 notes call
Access to pre-writing framework
$99$249
Limited Slots Available
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TRY IT RISK FREE FOR 24 HOURS

If you change your mind within 24 hours of purchase before sending your script, email us and we’ll refund you in full.
Pre-Writing Workshop

The Ultimate Guide to Pre-Writing Mastery

Six in-depth video classes
Lifetime access to all workshop materials
Exclusive techniques used by a Hollywood literary manager
Insider strategies for creating viable scripts
Achievable action-items to elevate your writing
$49 /One Time
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HOW IT WORKS

From Joining to Your Notes Call, Step by Step

Join The Breakout Intensive

Reserve your spot. You’ll get instant access to the pre-writing workshop plus instructions and timelines for sending your script.

Use the Pre-Writing Workshop

Work through the lessons to develop or refine your concept, structure, and characters. If you already have a complete draft, you can still use this step to tighten it before submission.

Send Your Script

When you’re ready, upload your script and complete a short intake so Conrad knows your goals and concerns.

Get Your Breakout Blueprint

Conrad reads your script and creates your written Breakdown, highlighting strengths, issues, and clear priorities for revision.

60-Minute Live Notes Call

You meet 1:1 with Conrad to dig into the notes, ask questions, and leave with a focused plan for your next draft.
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See Why Writers Love the Pre-Writing Workshop

Breakouts revolutionized the way I approach screenwriting. The structured tools and resources helped me refine my story ideas and turn them into compelling scripts.
Brennan J.
Client
Thanks to Breakouts, I finally unlocked my creative potential. The user-friendly interface and expert guidance made the pre-writing process enjoyable and productive.
Melanie C.
Client
Breakouts has everything a screenwriter needs to succeed. From brainstorming tools to advanced outlining features, it’s a one-stop solution for creating scripts that resonate. Hollywood, here I come!
Shannon M.
Client
Breakouts has everything a screenwriter needs to succeed. From brainstorming tools to advanced outlining features, it’s a one-stop solution for creating scripts that resonate. Hollywood, here I come!
Shannon M.
Client
Breakouts revolutionized the way I approach screenwriting. The structured tools and resources helped me refine my story ideas and turn them into compelling scripts.
Brennan J.
Client
Thanks to Breakouts, I finally unlocked my creative potential. The user-friendly interface and expert guidance made the pre-writing process enjoyable and productive.
Melanie C.
Client
WHY THIS WORKS

Feedback from Someone Who Sits on the Industry Side of the Table

Conrad Sun is an active Hollywood literary manager with over a decade of experience guiding writers and selling scripts to studios, producers, and executives.
He’s read thousands of scripts and knows first-hand why projects get passed on and what makes executives lean in.
The Breakout Intensive gives you direct access to that lens on your story.
Conrad’s insights come from over 10 years of experience working directly with screenwriters and industry executives. This is your chance to receive actionable feedback and direction that can hopefully help you in shaping your writing career.
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Not Ready for The Breakout Intensive?

Start in The Breakout Community — Conrad’s online writers’ room where you can develop your script with live sessions, guided feedback, and accountability.
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Build momentum, then come back to the Intensive when you’re ready for a full 1:1 read.
Frequently Asked questions

Got Questions? We’ve Got Answers

01
Do I need a finished script before I join?

No. When you join, you immediately unlock the pre-writing workshop so you can develop or polish your script first.

02
Is this a course or a community?

No. This is a single, 1:1 intensive: script read + written Breakdown + 60-minute call with Conrad.

03
Will Conrad personally be the one reading my script?

Yes. The whole point of The Breakout Intensive is to get a direct read and feedback from Conrad himself.

04
How soon will my call happen?

After you join and submit your script, you’ll be given available call windows. Exact timing depends on Conrad’s schedule, but you’ll know your slot before he starts reading.

05
Do I need to be in The Breakout Community first?

No, you can join the Intensive directly. The community is a great place to prep and keep improving between Intensives, but it’s not required.

06
Can I do more than one Intensive?

Yes, as long as there are open spots. Some writers return with new drafts or new projects when they’re ready for another deep dive.

Ready to Stop Guessing and Get a Real Read?

If you’ve been staring at the same script, wondering what the industry would actually say about it, The Breakout Intensive was built for you.
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This exclusive offer is available for the next 30 days only
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